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He followed her out of the building, staying far enough behind that he could watch her without feeling obligated to start a conversation. He’d been watching her for ages, since school had started months ago, but in the last several days she’d seemed... less, somehow. Less enthusiastic, less energized, less animated than she used to be. It was as though she’d lost part of herself in the last few days; he wanted to help her get it back, but he wasn’t sure how.
He watched her climb the stairs, push open the door, and step out into the gently falling snow. She walked several feet, beyond the shelter of the surrounding buildings, and then she stopped. He stopped too, hanging back to observe.
She turned her face to the sky, breathing deeply of the winter air. For several long moments, she didn’t move; then, she slipped off her backpack, turned her back to the snowbanks lining the sidewalk, spread her arms, and fell back into the snow. She did not stir after she landed, merely lay spread-eagled on the frozen ground.
He waited for several long moments before crossing over to her. There was an expression of relief on her face, as though she’d been holding her breath for hours and hours, and was finally able once again to draw breath. For all the relief, though, he did not read peace in her countenance.
Her eyes were closed, and though he knew she must have heard him approach through the crunchy snow, she didn’t acknowledge his presence. She merely lay in the snow, eyes stubbornly closed, seeming unaware of the snowflakes dusting her eyelashes and clinging to her lips.
“Um,” he said finally uncomfortable with the silence. “Are you okay?”
She opened one eye to study him, then closed it again. “Not really,” she answered.
He was quiet, unsure of how to respond. “Can I help?” It came out sounding trite, and he winced; he truly did wish to help.
She seemed not to notice his discomfort, and lay considering his offer for several moments. “Well,” she said finally, “snow angels alway look better in pairs.”
He hesitated, unsure whether she was humoring him, or if she really wanted someone to make a snow angel with her.
She opened her eyes, and smiled sadly. “I’m afraid that’s about the only thing you can help me with right now.”
After a moment’s consideration, he set his pack down next to hers, and lowered himself into the snow, careful to leave enough space for wings between them. The snow seeped almost instantly through his jeans, but he stayed where he was. Slowly, they swished their limbs through the powdery snow, creating the silhouette of two angels fallen from the sky.
She didn’t move for a long time after their angels were complete, and so he didn’t either. Finally, after his feet and fingers had long since gone numb, and the snow that had melted off of his face was freezing into his hair, he stood. He held out a hand to her, and pulled her out of the snow to stand beside him, careful not to damage the angels. She methodically brushed off her jeans, and then considered their angels for a time.
Eventually, a tiny smile curled the corners of her lips, a real smile. “Thank you,” she told him quietly.
And then she was gone.
He watched her climb the stairs, push open the door, and step out into the gently falling snow. She walked several feet, beyond the shelter of the surrounding buildings, and then she stopped. He stopped too, hanging back to observe.
She turned her face to the sky, breathing deeply of the winter air. For several long moments, she didn’t move; then, she slipped off her backpack, turned her back to the snowbanks lining the sidewalk, spread her arms, and fell back into the snow. She did not stir after she landed, merely lay spread-eagled on the frozen ground.
He waited for several long moments before crossing over to her. There was an expression of relief on her face, as though she’d been holding her breath for hours and hours, and was finally able once again to draw breath. For all the relief, though, he did not read peace in her countenance.
Her eyes were closed, and though he knew she must have heard him approach through the crunchy snow, she didn’t acknowledge his presence. She merely lay in the snow, eyes stubbornly closed, seeming unaware of the snowflakes dusting her eyelashes and clinging to her lips.
“Um,” he said finally uncomfortable with the silence. “Are you okay?”
She opened one eye to study him, then closed it again. “Not really,” she answered.
He was quiet, unsure of how to respond. “Can I help?” It came out sounding trite, and he winced; he truly did wish to help.
She seemed not to notice his discomfort, and lay considering his offer for several moments. “Well,” she said finally, “snow angels alway look better in pairs.”
He hesitated, unsure whether she was humoring him, or if she really wanted someone to make a snow angel with her.
She opened her eyes, and smiled sadly. “I’m afraid that’s about the only thing you can help me with right now.”
After a moment’s consideration, he set his pack down next to hers, and lowered himself into the snow, careful to leave enough space for wings between them. The snow seeped almost instantly through his jeans, but he stayed where he was. Slowly, they swished their limbs through the powdery snow, creating the silhouette of two angels fallen from the sky.
She didn’t move for a long time after their angels were complete, and so he didn’t either. Finally, after his feet and fingers had long since gone numb, and the snow that had melted off of his face was freezing into his hair, he stood. He held out a hand to her, and pulled her out of the snow to stand beside him, careful not to damage the angels. She methodically brushed off her jeans, and then considered their angels for a time.
Eventually, a tiny smile curled the corners of her lips, a real smile. “Thank you,” she told him quietly.
And then she was gone.
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Eight Thoughts About Nowadays
I.
I have forgotten how to write
Therefore I have forgotten how to exist.
II.
Life keeps tripping me every turn of the way
And I keep slipping in these ice-covered roads
III.
My hometown is screaming during the night
But I put on my headphones and try to sleep
IV.
People insist we don't care
And the moment we show them we do
They then try to discredit us
V.
My name means nothing to the world
VI.
Weeks go by and yet I still stand still
Waiting for autumn to turn into winter
VII.
The cold seep into my bones
And make me even more fragile than I already am
(My heart is frozen and I shiver)
VIII.
"Make me a poem" they say
I can't anymore
I
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turning five into four.
i. gregory,
with his sun-kissed skin & microscopic eyes,
knows not to don rachel's rose-coloured glasses
or take her reality classes.
although he is swimming in disbelief,
he can't help feeling like he's mourning
something that he's not yet lost.
ii. rachel's forte was never gardening.
her family tree could rain its leaves all day
but she will not be the rake, clawing
its way through the earth
to neatly bundle a bouquet;
she can not see ian's pleas
through a rose lens with embers in her eyes.
iii. ian is not afraid to get his hands dirty.
if an eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind,
then maybe rachel was the sacrifice,
& he will not h
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Wildwomen
I borrowed a horse last Thursday to hunt the Wildwoman. He was tall and painted hungry; She’d borrowed time, then disappeared.
I could not bend to pick the rocks. The horse kept kicking dusty circles. ‘Round the barn, the Wildwoman crept in boots that used to be mine.
We didn’t see Her till the last three barrels, where She sprouted from the grit between my fingers to silence shouting hands.
Winding down sore muscles, drawing ankles to earth, She traced my body before darting up my spine - straight line from heels, to hips, to Crown.
And in the half-breath the horse spied hay and tried to throw me from the saddle, She
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Wow, it's been ages since I've posted anything! That'll teach me to go to college…
Anyway, the concept of grieving has cropped up a whole bunch recently, and how it would be really tough to grieve if the people around you didn't know what was going on, and this kind of popped into my head. She's lost something, she's grieving, and even though he can't actually make it better, the companionship helps. Not sure if it's any good (it's been SO long!), but it felt good to write something again. Enjoy!
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It is lovely. I felt like I needed to read something like this today. I wonder if this is something that writers (or artists in general) share: the appreciation for small, miraculous events, as well as the ability to observe them. It can be meeting someone after many years in the densest crowd, or having that perfect moment of understanding with a stranger.
A few suggestions:
"seeming unaware of the snowflakes dusting her eyelashes and clinging to her lips. " This "seemingly unaware" is overused.
"He stopped to, hanging back to observe." Small typo: to/too
"For all the relief, though, he did not read peace in her countenance." I understand what you mean, but I don't really see how he could make the difference just by seeing.
A few suggestions:
"seeming unaware of the snowflakes dusting her eyelashes and clinging to her lips. " This "seemingly unaware" is overused.
"He stopped to, hanging back to observe." Small typo: to/too
"For all the relief, though, he did not read peace in her countenance." I understand what you mean, but I don't really see how he could make the difference just by seeing.